I am looking for critical input on a Star Trek project I am working on called: Dark Trek-Empyre of Terra here on SC.
http://storycrafter.com/story/index.php?storyid=5146 If you don't understand something, feel free to join the cast as an Observer. Use your most recognized ID and preface it with an 'O'... example: *Cap'n Rahn* becomes *O Cap'n Rahn*. The reason for this may be apparent, lol.
Please be Honest - can't fix what I don't recognize as broken! Or be able to Spin my way out of, hee hee!