next »

[Pariah]

Hi!

I was wondering if any fellow storycrafters out there could look over my title "Lands of Adventure" -- in the fantasy section -- and tell me what they think of everything that's in place so far -- if anything's missing, if anything is poorly done -- the usual.

Thanks!

[Alhaja]

It's beautifully done. The rules are long and reasonably complex, but beautifully presented -- the bullet points really help with reading it. The complexity and length could be an adavantage, since someone who actually reads through them and applies with an appropriately made character is more likely to be the sort of person you're looking for and interested enough to stick around.

I hadn't looked at the story beyond the teaser on the main page since I'm not particularly interested in a game "in the vein of classic gaming," but your presentation on the story page is almost enough to make me reconsider dismissing applying out of hand.

[Pariah]

Wow, thank you Alhaja -- I really appreciate your comments.  I was a bit nervous that the rules thread might be a bit much to read through -- you've made me feel a lot better about the length, though.  Thanks again!

[Lex]

I read through them too, and found it a great read.  Very thorough, and well done.  Definitely agree with Alhaja that you should get serious people to apply after reading through it all.  Had I more time, I would have done so myself. :)  Best of luck with it.