Okay, so I was wondering what everyone here thought about the RPing going on in
http://www.storycrafter.com/story/index.php?storyid=2903 there, Destined =)
I am Alynn Lyl and I am looking mainly for critiques on my own posts, but I would also like to know what everyone thinks of my character, my fellow roleplayers, and the general way the story is going. We're running a little slow now, and before the story shuts down I would like to find some inspirational words to liven up the place.
Of course, everything I hear about the story is not bound to be good. Everything has it's bad points, and I am open to both sides of the discussion.