I agree with Argyle - the premise looks good and quite interesting. You could have a good run with this one, if your cast holds out. Sorta wish I had seen it as well, but then again, I'm quite busy as it is.
If you start losing players, and it WILL happen, with any luck your active players will know some persons willing, capable and eager to join in. As a Storycrafter myself, let me say this - don't get discouraged and don't 'kill' anyone off immediately when you lost them. You might just get someone to 'adopt' a character and sometimes those with RL issues actually come back! NPC's can be your friend.
Deal with the slow times with patience and pick a GOOD Principal Author - they can be absolutely invaluable.
It looks like a good yarn - I may just have to lurk about and watch.
